
Some of the changes included making the word struggle actually look like a struggle, placing the word restrict in a more suffocating space, adding a "frustration" page to show the mother's exasperation with the son. The mother's spread for "dialogue/advice" changed to "observe/advice", the son will now "listen" and "respond" to the father, rather than "listen/repeat" and lastly the mother "pleads" to the father for understanding rather than being "thoughtful". She is a needy person after all.

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