Saturday, February 14, 2009

domestic dysfunction

my first stab binding experience.

The teapot (mother) is pleading to be heard by a detached husband. The "p" has been cropped in order to allow the word to rise from the spout.

Frustration: In addition to using a condensed font with uncomfortably tight tracking, the "R" and the "A" are also colliding.

Previously the observe text curved along the edge of the teapot similar to the treatment of the advice text. For variety, I tucked the "o" behind the teapot and added a little breathing room for the observation to include a pause before advice is given to the son.

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